Broken Biscuits (A day in the life)


IT STARTS WITH

jeans on the tile floor

dusty knees like powdered sugar

ready to walk through the window

into the sunlight saturday

attached to hangover headache

past the polish faces antique faces

with a stunned look like they don’t understand the joke

the shopkeeper hosing off the sidewalk

Puerto Rican kids chasing each other past crossing guard cops

Drunks making paper bag morning prayers

then down to the subway

everyone pretending to sleep

or head in book gently swaying with the track

thinking about loneliness

and grocery list lips

under sickly fluorescent shine

stop and out with the herd

everyone flashes by too quickly

to count for anything

up syrup filth steps

to pancake mud street

I’m glad to mean nothing

another rat in the garbage

like all the others

money from jeans

phone into jeans

walk signals

disinterested foreigners

sitting in folding chairs on the street

wishing for younger women

or their father to be alive again

for just one more old country day

when things were cleaner than this

dont walk anymore

then back into tunnel like ants

home to the neighborhood

the old polish faces still waiting for the punchline

close the front door and my mailbox falls off the wall

jeans on the tile floor

ghosts haunt the hall

-Joel

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3 Responses to “Broken Biscuits (A day in the life)”

  1. kendall Says:

    nice. do you know bob dylan’s poem ‘last thoughts on woody guthrie’? its amazing and something about this poem of yours made me think of it and how you oughtta hear/read it if you haven’t already. a couple years ago my boyfriend and i spent a whole day playing it on repeat, literally for about 8 hours, until we memorized almost all of it. good stuff.

  2. thedukewantsmedead Says:

    Thanks, that’s great; no I hadn’t read it until I checked your comment and wow, that’s really good. There are a ton of great lines, but some I like are:
    “The ones who jump on the wagon
    Just for a while ’cause they know it’s in style
    To get their kicks, get out of it quick
    And make all kinds of money and chicks
    And you yell to yourself and you throw down yer hat
    Sayin’, “Christ do I gotta be like that
    Ain’t there no one here that knows where I’m at
    Ain’t there no one here that knows how I feel
    Good God Almighty
    THAT STUFF AIN’T REAL”

  3. kendall Says:

    yeah, i have a hard time picking my favorites. if you listen to it 100 times then almost all of the lines become your favorite at some point. and if youve only just read it, i recommend letting him read it to you.

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