IT STARTS WITH
jeans on the tile floor
dusty knees like powdered sugar
ready to walk through the window
into the sunlight saturday
attached to hangover headache
past the polish faces antique faces
with a stunned look like they don’t understand the joke
the shopkeeper hosing off the sidewalk
Puerto Rican kids chasing each other past crossing guard cops
Drunks making paper bag morning prayers
then down to the subway
everyone pretending to sleep
or head in book gently swaying with the track
thinking about loneliness
and grocery list lips
under sickly fluorescent shine
stop and out with the herd
everyone flashes by too quickly
to count for anything
up syrup filth steps
to pancake mud street
I’m glad to mean nothing
another rat in the garbage
like all the others
money from jeans
phone into jeans
walk signals
disinterested foreigners
sitting in folding chairs on the street
wishing for younger women
or their father to be alive again
for just one more old country day
when things were cleaner than this
dont walk anymore
then back into tunnel like ants
home to the neighborhood
the old polish faces still waiting for the punchline
close the front door and my mailbox falls off the wall
jeans on the tile floor
ghosts haunt the hall
-Joel
November 1, 2010 at 10:59 am |
nice. do you know bob dylan’s poem ‘last thoughts on woody guthrie’? its amazing and something about this poem of yours made me think of it and how you oughtta hear/read it if you haven’t already. a couple years ago my boyfriend and i spent a whole day playing it on repeat, literally for about 8 hours, until we memorized almost all of it. good stuff.
November 1, 2010 at 11:22 am |
Thanks, that’s great; no I hadn’t read it until I checked your comment and wow, that’s really good. There are a ton of great lines, but some I like are:
“The ones who jump on the wagon
Just for a while ’cause they know it’s in style
To get their kicks, get out of it quick
And make all kinds of money and chicks
And you yell to yourself and you throw down yer hat
Sayin’, “Christ do I gotta be like that
Ain’t there no one here that knows where I’m at
Ain’t there no one here that knows how I feel
Good God Almighty
THAT STUFF AIN’T REAL”
November 1, 2010 at 12:23 pm |
yeah, i have a hard time picking my favorites. if you listen to it 100 times then almost all of the lines become your favorite at some point. and if youve only just read it, i recommend letting him read it to you.